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Beautiful!

I love that song! XD

<3 Toad Lock

Television-Man responds:

Haha, thanks :D

Not a bad start

Heya. This was pretty entertaining. But I've got a few suggestions to improve further installments of this series:

First, don't have him slide. It's impossible to engage in instant and perpetual motion without causative movement. Have him bounce over to where he needs to be. There's a good tutorial on making a C/G/Lock character move back at the LL site. It'll teach you easing (which I've come to learn is a MUST).

Second, you don't need to tween him on a "flip horizontal." Makes him become flat and flip like a coin. Just have his Lock move over to the other side of him. Since you've got a spherical character, it'll look 10x better. The gun can flip horizontal... it might have a funny visual effect.

Third, in a word.... longer.

But it's a good Lock movie. Better than most "firsts." Just work on his movement a bit, and the next will be fantastic.

--KinopioT/Toad Lock

SamurajZ responds:

Yeah allright ,, Check out my other episode! .. Its out now!

Nice job.

Claymation is hard, but you did a decent job at it. Gotta give ya props for effort and PATIENCE.

Bwa ha ha! r0x0rz

I've been waiting for this for some time. It was so worth the wait. Great job to everyone! Deserves much accolades.

Wonchop responds:

To the accolade shop!

That was funny!

LOL, You had me cracking up, that was a funny little boost for my afternoon. Best thing I've reviewed so far on this little romb through the Portal.

That was really good.

I'm impressed. It was a neat concept, and I liked the ending. Good job.

I wasn't sure at first, but...

Once it got past him flipping the channels (Monty Python rocks, btw), I was cracking up til the credits. The ketchup splatter was hilarious, and the dude just DFO's. LOL, great work.

There's potential...

Biggest issue, if you're going to make your character style in tribute to another style, give it your own spin. The main character was almost a trace-over of Stan made black and white. My own characters were originally (like five years ago) inspired by Toad, but I've given them my own spin, proportioning, and style. Take the characters you're using and make them YOUR's, not just copies of South Park characters (unless you're doing a South Park spoof).

You're a decent voice-actor, I've gotta give you that. Just work on character design a little bit, and maybe a more polished end credits scene (where you had the replay button). Organize the text a little, and make a clearer Replay button. Remember, that's the most recent thing a viewer sees after your movie's over.

I am thoroughly glad I clicked.

I don't know where to start. That piece was brilliantly thought out. Who would have thought to do something like this for a coffee mug? I felt so bad for the poor little guy when he said "but... that's all I know how to give..." I was like "awwww!" I honestly wasn't sure what you were going to do with it, but the thing with the dog was great. And the ending, with that little touch of humor, was perfect. Honestly the best Portal entry I've clicked tonight.

You sexy lezboo

I loved it on Sheezy, and I still love it on NG. You so got a 5, Sqeezy.

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